To the person I love... :)
She is the one who inspires me
the verse of my heart; my soul's melody.
the lullaby in my darkest nights
the battle song of all my fights
the symphony of the words I rhyme,
my personal conch in the sands of time.
She loves me with no demands
through all my tears, she holds my hand.
never a word that would sting me bad
a smile-generator when I am sad.
she is person I wouldn't replace for another,
she is the person I love-my Mother
Thanks to Leo for making me write this poem. I really did smile and feel happy after writing this :)
Whatever i express through my words about my mother, would just fall short of COMPLETELY defining what she means to me.
So just one thing- Thank you for your love, care, protection... everything. Thank you for making me the person I am, thank you for giving me the strength to stand, thank you for hearing me out, for wiping my tears, for being a good friend, for being a person with whom i could share ANYTHING :)
I love you :)
Lovely poem :)
ReplyDeletegood verses !
-DeepaK
beautifully said
ReplyDelete@Deepak thanks :)
ReplyDelete@Farah im glad you think so. thanks for visiting my blog :)
Nicely written :).
ReplyDeleteWhat you have said is totally true.
No one in this world can ever equate to a mother :) <3.
Beautiful tribute to your mother...:)
ReplyDeleteMagnificently written NS :)
ReplyDeleteThis is just so touching for the person who loves us the most without asking for anything in return - Mother.
Have a nice day :)
Wonderfully written. :) A very beautiful and touching tribute. :)
ReplyDelete@Pooja Thanks dear. I have just expressed what EVERYONE feels :) glad you liked it :P
ReplyDelete@saru di. thank you so much :)
@DS thanks!! mothers really are something aren't they? :P :)
@Raj I am glad you liked my verse. thanks for visiting my blog :) good to see you here :)
You wouldn't mind if I wrote a poem about my mother too would you? :O
ReplyDeleteI mean I was meaning to do it since a long time ;) but never did :(.
I just dont want to to be like I copied or anything.
Do let me know :*
why would i mind Pooja??? of COURSE i wouldnt.
ReplyDeletego ahead with it!
Thanks dear :) <3
ReplyDeleteThat's Incredible!
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful.... This was very touching! You have captured my mind with such beautiful words!!
ReplyDeleteAmazing!
~L
Beautiful Kirti :)
ReplyDelete@samyyr thanks! glad you liked it :)
ReplyDelete@L thank you so much. its always a pleasure to see your comments :)
@Sam thanks!!!!!! its lovely to see you here :) :P
tribe, mothers are divine.
ReplyDeleteHello, How is your day?
ReplyDeleteHope all is well,
Appreciated your invaluable support to us,
Best regards.
Join us any time and share a verse or two,
Your talent pleases me and makes a huge difference too,
Hope to see you in soon,
Cheers,
xoxox
well I really getting a lot of inspirations from you.....
ReplyDeletegreat didi
When you posting yaar??
ReplyDelete@Jingle thank you. will try and join you soon... once i write a good verse next :)
ReplyDelete@Rainak thank you! and my poem inspiring?? that definitely made my day!! thanks again!
@DS tumne bhi to itni DER baad ek post banaya :P i dunno yaar... i havent written anything new recently. i might just end up writing crap if i dont post a poem!! :P LOVED your recent post. absolutely LOVED it :)
Loved it Kirti! Such a beautiful ode to the most beautiful person on this entire planet. Gave me goosebumps, LOVED it a lot! Keep writing, your words have something unique in them :)
ReplyDeletethank you so MUCH Arti JI!!! so glad you liked it!!
ReplyDeleteHey you put up a Save your voice ..or sumthing .....I clicked on it and it was no longer there..Coud you please bring that post back?
ReplyDelete@rahul i had some technical problem with the post. most of the ppl couldnt see anything except some green marks. so i reverted it back to drafts. will try and post soon..
ReplyDeleteThe best i have come across till now according to me ,pure magic
ReplyDelete@The new world thanks a lot! and welcome to my blog :)
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