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Dusk

In twilight promises 
of glistening sands,
dusk rocks on death.

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  1. UnknownJanuary 24, 2013 at 12:36 PM

    Lovely Haiku Kirti. Paints a vivid imagery. :)

    nice to see you in action after long time. :)

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    1. N.S.KirtiJanuary 24, 2013 at 1:24 PM

      It feels amazing to write a Haiku again too Harshal! I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the visit :)

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  2. Woman'n'BeyondJanuary 24, 2013 at 1:38 PM

    very strong worded, I would love to hear thoughts behind them.

    Perpetual Dark

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    1. N.S.KirtiJanuary 24, 2013 at 2:15 PM

      Welcome to my blog Meenakshi :)
      I was trying to convey the idea of how dusk in all its darkness masks the killer rocks jutting within the sea. So though twilight makes the shores beautiful, dusk camouflages doom at the same time...
      Thanks for the visit :)

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  3. AntaraJanuary 24, 2013 at 2:34 PM

    WOW! Oh my my that's quite some dark, strong imagery. I absolutely love this.

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  4. UnknownJanuary 24, 2013 at 6:35 PM

    very strong

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  5. Amrit SinhaJanuary 25, 2013 at 12:15 AM

    Beautiful !!!

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  6. UnknownJanuary 26, 2013 at 11:13 AM

    awesome haiku Kirti..:)

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  7. DSJanuary 27, 2013 at 6:02 PM

    Nicely written NS! Exams over?

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    1. N.S.KirtiJanuary 29, 2013 at 5:47 PM

      Thanks a lot DS! yeah second sem has already started and its hectic!

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  8. Sam BFebruary 3, 2013 at 11:04 AM

    O_o eerie, in a good way :)

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    1. N.S.KirtiFebruary 6, 2013 at 6:21 PM

      I find it a bit eerie too sam! thanks for the visit!:D

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  9. Eliz FrankFebruary 6, 2013 at 6:38 AM

    Wonderful haiku! You should write more for our group. ;-) Following you on GFC too.
    Eliz

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    1. N.S.KirtiFebruary 6, 2013 at 6:21 PM

      Thanks a million! I will surely k=join your group.
      Thanks for the visit :)

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  10. GvSparx - Inspiring LivesMarch 24, 2013 at 7:29 PM

    Hai jeevan ki raftaar yahi, koi aata hai koi jaata hai...
    jaane wala aane waale ke liye aasan khaali kar jaata hai..
    - Anonymous :)

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