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Another Haiku?? :P

If my pen's nib breaks and
and the ink flows; would I bank
the river of my words?
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  1. AnonymousJuly 6, 2011 at 11:36 PM

    Nope,you would just let the words flow. And I do hope that you will.Lovely piece :)

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  2. AnonymousJuly 6, 2011 at 11:57 PM

    I wouldn't let you :)

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  3. N.S.KirtiJuly 7, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    lol.. thank you both. that was surely encouraging :)

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  4. Chronicles of IllusionsJuly 7, 2011 at 12:04 PM

    I love this. :)

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  5. Vinay Leo R.July 9, 2011 at 5:03 PM

    Quite beautiful words :) But you just overshot it in syllables I think :D I read a 6-7-6 form here :) Keep at it. Your thoughts are becoming quite mature. And please don't worry about a nib break. You just flow on..

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  6. N.S.KirtiJuly 12, 2011 at 5:29 PM

    AWWWW!!!!!!!! i didnt check the syllables properly!! gross... anyways thanks lEO.. :):)

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  7. AnonymousJuly 17, 2011 at 8:39 PM

    From the two posts I've read so far....I should think not:-)

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  8. KirtimaliniJuly 20, 2011 at 9:11 AM

    Wow! I've never tried Haikus.. This sure gives me inspiration! :)

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  9. N.S.KirtiJuly 20, 2011 at 3:04 PM

    thank you Nadira Ji.
    thank you Malini. do try and write a Haiku. but check the rules first. i made a mistake with the syllables...

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