Dreams... and reality
There is a pool in my dreams,
that cant be deciphered in the dark;
for it converges with the gloom inside,
and shows up in the light of a spark.
I grope for a way inside the cave,
but the stones keep falling into the pool;
and the loud echoes made by the splash,
reminds me to follow certain rules.
I walk with the fear of stumbling inside,
and shards of rock cut into my feet;
the blood becomes a part of the gory waters
each time, my heart takes a wrong beat.
There is no light, no way out
and i struggle with my insides
I stand there, my energy fades
but the agony never really subsides.
I try to come out of the illusion,
only to find the real world is fake;
and my dreams, though dark
only have my passion at stake.
But the reality is more gruesome,
and there is no escaping the fact.
thus, i recline into the same dark cave,
at least there, my soul is intact...
that cant be deciphered in the dark;
for it converges with the gloom inside,
and shows up in the light of a spark.
I grope for a way inside the cave,
but the stones keep falling into the pool;
and the loud echoes made by the splash,
reminds me to follow certain rules.
I walk with the fear of stumbling inside,
and shards of rock cut into my feet;
the blood becomes a part of the gory waters
each time, my heart takes a wrong beat.
There is no light, no way out
and i struggle with my insides
I stand there, my energy fades
but the agony never really subsides.
I try to come out of the illusion,
only to find the real world is fake;
and my dreams, though dark
only have my passion at stake.
But the reality is more gruesome,
and there is no escaping the fact.
thus, i recline into the same dark cave,
at least there, my soul is intact...
This is nice.. right..shows your pensive mood, perhaps..
ReplyDeleteI feel that so many times...a beautifully dark poem...loved it :)
ReplyDeleteWow... dark and a bit frightening. You captured the sensations well.
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Dreams are preferred to reality at times. Dark poem, good one.
ReplyDelete@Ramesh ji. thanks and yeah, it does reflect my sad mood
ReplyDelete@Antara thanks yaar!!
@Kim thank you. your poem is lovely too :)
@Shail. thats true. dreams are a silent console in times of harsh reality. glad you liked it!
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThere is no light, no way out
ReplyDeleteand i struggle with my insides
I stand there, my energy fades
but the agony never really subsides.
I try to come out of the illusion,
only to find the real world is fake;
and my dreams, though dark
only have my passion at stake.
wow i liked these lines :)
wonderful writing