surrender to its peers,
forcing to take it beneath?
or will it cling
to the narrow windshield
daring to be unique?
This question i ask my heart
for the rain of time is
shuddering my drop-like dreams
would they survive?
be a part of unknown half?
or merge with the common stream...
How beautifully you told the journey of a droplet! Brilliant use of words beneath and unique. Great creation..
ReplyDeletethanks you Saru Ji. and er.. i didnt use the words intentionally, they came with the flow :)
ReplyDeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteAnd the droplet I know so well can never be a part of the common stream :) And she will be something else :)
thank you so much Antara!! thats so sweet of you :)
ReplyDeletethe imagery of the fate of a raindrop is amazing, what elegant piece.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
simply fantastic.
ReplyDeleteWonderful story told beautifully. Very nicely done!
ReplyDeleteHere is my second offering for this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/
@The cello strings thanks you so much :)
ReplyDelete@charlesmashburn thanks. and your poem is simply wonderful too!