I could picture a forest at dawn with the first rays of light breaching the leafy canopy. those light rays which later in the day are unnoticed as they blend with the other rays :)
beautiful haiku. one of the best I've seen from you.
That is exactly the picture i imagined while writing this Leo! woah, seems to me you are turning a mind-reader ;) i am so glad my haiku reached to you so well :)
I have seriously started to love your haiku now :) Ever since you wrote the one about blue ink, you've been getting better and better and better. Love this!
dawn as in the importance of a ordinary prick of light dawning upon me... actually i wanted to use some other word, but yeah, had to keep in with the syllable count. glad you liked it TF!!
I could picture a forest at dawn with the first rays of light breaching the leafy canopy. those light rays which later in the day are unnoticed as they blend with the other rays :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful haiku. one of the best I've seen from you.
That is exactly the picture i imagined while writing this Leo! woah, seems to me you are turning a mind-reader ;)
Deletei am so glad my haiku reached to you so well :)
short and simple !
ReplyDeletethanks Rahul :) and a haiku needs to be short and simple!! :D
DeleteI have seriously started to love your haiku now :) Ever since you wrote the one about blue ink, you've been getting better and better and better.
ReplyDeleteLove this!
yay! :D (because you love my haiku by now :P)
Deleteand seriously yaar, that blue one is my favorite till now.
and thank you! :D
I agree on what Leo said, really a best and extraordinary!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jaideep :)
DeleteDefinitely not an ordinary haiku :0 makes me imagine a beautiful picture of it :) lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you Maharukh. glad it painted the image i wanted :)
Deletesuperb one... :)
ReplyDeletehmm Amazing haiku .. :)
ReplyDeleteordinary view
Thank you Anu :)
DeleteThis is what I call a picture..without a picture..a true haiku..creating the picture in readers mind..well done...God bless!!
ReplyDeleteRS:)
Thank you Ramesh Ji!! i am so glad you like it!! :D
DeleteThank God for Leo for that comment!!! Or else I was completely lost!
ReplyDeleteLOL :P no matter DS, but its a pity you dont get my poems!
Deleteaah! impeccable...
ReplyDeleteThank you Panchali Di! good to see you here! :)
DeleteIt paints a beautiful picture in my head!
ReplyDeleteDoes the universe whisper to you?
I am glad it does Pranita :)
DeleteIt takes open eyes to see familiar things in new ways.
ReplyDeleteOrdinary Day
So true MMT... so true... thanks for the visit! :)
DeleteI dont know much about Haiku but that was simple and beautiful indeed!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jaish :)
Deletelovely Haiku...loved the last line...superbly written... :) :) :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!! :)
DeleteLovely dawn images ~ Nice one ~
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Grace. good to have you back on my blog :)
DeleteConcept was brilliant. Loved it. But wonder what is that 'dawn' doing there. It seems to be introduced just to maintain the syllable count.
ReplyDeletedawn as in the importance of a ordinary prick of light dawning upon me... actually i wanted to use some other word, but yeah, had to keep in with the syllable count.
Deleteglad you liked it TF!!