Smothered By Love
DAY-1
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Your sickly sweet tongue
rasping sweet nothings
burn my ear,
repulse my body,
make my skin crawl
till I crouch
unseen,
unseen,
unheard,
choked by the sobs
none can see,
none can hear
I cant breathe
as your false words
caress me,
as your false words
caress me,
punch into my heart
a million holes
which you fill yet again
with your selfish acts
escape is what i need
can't breathe with you above
I feel smothered by your love....
Muse given by Leo.
PS: I am leaving for a week to Rajamundry and I requested Leo, my close friend and fellow-blogger to give me a topic a day to write verses. This is the first one. Will be posting the rest after I return else a terrible threat awaits me!!
WOW. You should send this for a competition.
ReplyDeleteI wish a big 'WOW' and 'AWESOME' would convey what I actually want to say :) >3
ReplyDelete*A topic well chosen,Leo* :)
It is sometimes crazy how much I love dark and morbid poetry and prose. The last two lines were simply perfect.
ReplyDeleteSomeone do me a favour and compose a song with this. Seriously.
Wow! Wow! Wow!
ReplyDeleteTotally Wow!!
You made me speechless!
This was perfectly penned down if you ask me.
And I go with Antara, Someone should really compose a song with this :).
Its time to call someone who knows music well!!
@The Narcissist Did you really feel this poem was up for a competition?? many thanks for that!
ReplyDelete@Kinara Dont worry, what you wanted to say is well-conveyed!! and yeah, Kudos to Leo for setting me with this!
@Antara Hi-five for liking dark and morbid verses :P song?? isse?? chal hum dono hi compose karte hain :P :P
ReplyDelete@Pooja better start talking again dear, i dont want you to lose your sppech :P and thanks for liking this verse :) and song?? bring in on!! :P :P