Awesome! This is a wonderful haiku. A masterpiece I would say. Well balanced and accompanied with the picture it makes a wonderful haiga. Thank you for sharing
Kirti, thanks for your comments.. I have written many a haiku linked with each other...chains where more than 05 haiku get linked to tell a story..don't know whether you have noticed.. well give a link to just one here..
@Leo but if storm hits us too fast, it would be a hard time imagining it slow isnt it Leo? and its already hanging on the bay, threatening break anytime... but anyways, i am a one for wishful thinking!! thanks Leo :)
@MMT lol :P i would rather hang on to the 'maybe' part!! :)
She surely will...yes...hold her in your heart..and let joy bloom from your eyes.. I loved this haiku..thanks :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful picture!! and innocent haiku:)
ReplyDeleteWell before or not, she *will* reach you.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful interpretation by the way :-)
Nice picture and haiku ~ I hope so ~
ReplyDeleteLovely picture and haiku match.
ReplyDeleteLove your image of reaching the gate before the storm.
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku and great photo choice ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteAwesome! This is a wonderful haiku. A masterpiece I would say. Well balanced and accompanied with the picture it makes a wonderful haiga.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing
Namaste
@Ramesh Ji thank you for your wonderful inspiring comment Ramesj Ji. and hold in my heart i will... and i am glad you liked this :)
ReplyDelete@Tarang thanks :)
@Antara I hope it does... thanks :)
@Grace thanks :) and i hope that too :)
@Karen Thanks! the Haiku was actually inspired by the photo itself!
@Judith I am glad you liked the image i used! thanks! :)
@Carol Thank you so much :)
@chevrefeuille oh i am so honored you think that way! thanks :)
Kirti, thanks for your comments.. I have written many a haiku linked with each other...chains where more than 05 haiku get linked to tell a story..don't know whether you have noticed.. well give a link to just one here..
ReplyDeletehttp://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/01/happy-morning-dew.html
I am sure you will have a look..
RS:)
A real cute pic with a real cute Haiku :).
ReplyDeleteIts really sweet :) Just like you ;).
Great combination of image, words and response to the prompt.
ReplyDeleteWow!! Sure it will NS :)
ReplyDeletePS - Thanks for removing the word verification :)
PPS - Exams nahi hain kya?? Lagta hai sab padhai ho gayi hai!!! Roz nayi post dashboard mein aa jati hai :P :P
@Pooja thanks dear!
ReplyDelete@Poetrydiary i am glad you thought so. thanks for visiting my blog!
thanks DS!
PS:you are welcome. i should be thanking Leo though. he helped me with that :)
PPS: arre first exam English hai. to i spend most of my time reading articles and stuff :
That's an awesome and sweet haiku :)
ReplyDeleteIt definitely will :) Just, you must think of the spring as fast and the storm as slow maybe :D Beautiful haiku.
ReplyDelete"Maybe, maybe not," spring says with a sly wink.
ReplyDeleteWaiting for Springtime
Thank you Valli. I am glad you liked it :)
ReplyDelete@Leo but if storm hits us too fast, it would be a hard time imagining it slow isnt it Leo? and its already hanging on the bay, threatening break anytime... but anyways, i am a one for wishful thinking!! thanks Leo :)
@MMT lol :P i would rather hang on to the 'maybe' part!! :)
The picture itself tells it all! :D very nice... ;)
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