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In your kohl-lined eyes
there lies a desire that sings
through these words I write.



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  1. Saru SinghalFebruary 14, 2012 at 8:26 AM

    Brilliant work Kirti...:) Loved it!

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  2. Saru SinghalFebruary 14, 2012 at 8:26 AM

    I am writing something similar to this...:)

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  3. N.S.KirtiFebruary 14, 2012 at 9:39 AM

    @Saru Di thanks!! and longing to read you post!!

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  4. Princess PooFebruary 14, 2012 at 1:17 PM

    Nice one kirti.
    I don't know how you do it, but all your writings have a deep meaning in them.
    Loved it :).

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  5. AntaraFebruary 14, 2012 at 3:48 PM

    Love the photo. Beautiful girl.
    And this poem touched my heart. We went to this orphanage for girl children and...this reminded me of that.

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  6. MyWordsWhisperFebruary 14, 2012 at 10:16 PM

    Such a beautiful girl..and what beautiful eyes she has. Your haiku works so nicely with it.

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  7. DSFebruary 15, 2012 at 6:46 AM

    The pic is so beautiful. And you have given it a nice description with your lines.
    Just perfect!!

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  8. N.S.KirtiFebruary 15, 2012 at 10:24 AM

    @Pooja The photo inspired me this time. there was something in her beautiful, beautiful eyes that drew me and my words...glad you liked this one :)

    @Antara I love the photo too :) and girl's orphanage... i dont remember you telling me abt it... kab gayi thi??

    @MyWordsWhisper i agree... she really has beautiful eyes. that is what triggered this haiku in the first place :) glad you liked this one. welcome to my blog :)

    @DS Ahh... this photo seems to have quite an effect on everyone isnt it??? it is really and truly beautiful :) good to see you here again! :) and glad you liked this

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  9. Vinay Leo R.February 16, 2012 at 9:44 PM

    Oh absolutely.. there is desire in her eyes that sings.. and your words definitely reveal her music. :)

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  10. Magical Mystical TeacherFebruary 18, 2012 at 7:58 AM

    I'm hearing the music...


    A Desire Shattered

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  11. N.S.KirtiFebruary 18, 2012 at 7:10 PM

    Glad it could reach you @MMT :)

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  12. bantiApril 17, 2012 at 1:21 PM

    -Good piece of information.

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