The warriors of human life

Hi!! sorry for neglecting my blog yet again. but what to do, i am hardly getting any time to BREATHE, let alone open my comp and make a post. Now i can finally understand why class 12 is said to be hectic.
so anyways, I wrote this poem suddenly while i was reading for a chemistry test and i finally got time today to sit and type it!!

THE WARRIORS OF HUMAN LIFE

 

'Cause we were hit by a lightning bolt
a charred mass was our shrivelled skins
our mighty hearts were dead of revolt
our minds, the grave were both akin.

Barely alive, in a despondent state
our good hearts were the only flame
illuminating dark paths of our fate
helping us to live a life again.

Through slit like eyes we saw beauty
one morn, as we were in search of drink
alas! we couldn't claim it our booty
we knew what desires and dreams could bring.

We shut our eyes and crawled away
but the beauty followed like a stubborn shade
"claim my gaiety and let me stay
lest i will soon flicker and fade!"


But We The Warriors Of Human Life
flung our swords at the illusionary spark
its shimmer and glitter broke on our knife
and we again, were plunged in dark.

But then came the shining sun
its incandescence warming our core
and blooming flowers showered in tons
the Angels above singing our lore.

We The Warriors Of Human Life
had written our names in history's gold
conquering our way in every strife
we let the story of our courage unfold.


We accepted our wrong on a bed of spades
and let our sins burn our spree
but at the end our good unlocked the heavenly gates
and finally, our valiant souls were free.

Comments

  1. Great poem :) Enjoyed it..good to see a rhyme once in a while.
    Don't worry about neglect..the muse will come when its ready :)

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  2. Great poem dear, very profound and well worded:)

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  3. it is good to free our soul, isn't it?

    good hearts work.
    :)

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  4. So finally good deeds were rewarded by the souls being set free. Good one.

    http://wordsinverse.wordpress.com/2011/11/04/raindrops/

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  5. Well done. As Wordsasunder says "it's good to see a rhyme". Thanks.
    I am not in Rhyming, because I am a haiku poet and in haiku rhyme cannot be used.

    http://chevrefeuilleshaikublog.blogspot.com/search/label/Thursday%20Poets%20Rally

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  6. Beautiful yet again :-) loved the part about the illusionary spark.
    (By the way...woh chem test gaya kaisa tha?)

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  7. Kirti becoming wiser each day.. the effect of her favorite subject (Physics) maybe :P ;) Nice poem dear.

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  8. what desires dreams can bring! Loved this story-poem, really drew me in

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  9. @wordsasunder thanks... even i love a poem with a rhyming scheme :)

    @saru ji thanks a lot!

    @orange tree yeah it is :) glad u liked it
    @shail thanks!!

    @ Chèvrefeuille thanks a lot!!

    @janu thanks!!

    @antara thanks yaar. btw tere pics masstt the. bani mam ka test kaisa hua?? phod di hogi for sure... and no, us din chem test hua nahi :P hum log DB ko pta liye :) aaj hai though- full organic test+ polymers(mera bansh hoga)

    @Leo yeah yeah, you would say that :P thanks btw and physics is NOT my fav subject :P

    @zenmirror thanks a lot!! i am glad you enjoyed it :)

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  10. nice...i'm a huge admirer of rhyming poetry..

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  11. Bani maam ka test kaun phoda woh ab puchne ki zarurat hain? Hamesha tu hi phodti hain :-P

    aur btw thanks. Now go and read my newest post. Jaa!!!

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  12. KIrti, I recently opened a blog, but i am not able to view the comments, how do I view them. please advise!!!!
    http://confusediridium.blogspot.com/
    I am not tech savvy thats why and how do I get the license (creative commons wala)???
    your blog was nice. the poem is beautiful.

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  13. welcome joining poets rally week 56 today.

    best.
    ;)

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  14. invite you to join poetry picnic today, simply share a relevant or a random piece, and enjoy!
    Happy Thanksgiving,
    Always, your presence is sunshine to us.
    Best Wishes!

    your talent rocks.
    xoxox

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  15. And the warriors died to grow some wings.
    To rest their tired backs on an eagle's crest.
    To depart from this world united in valour.
    And join goblets and clubs at Valhalla's feast.

    Beautiful poem, Kirti.
    Visited your blog through Antara's. I will follow you now.

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  16. And this comment is for subscribing to more comments. :)

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  17. @D2 thanks for visiting my blog and liking my poem!! and i was already a follower of your blog :) you are awesome :) thanks again :)

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  18. @Kirti : Yeah, I'd seen but I guess you don't comment much, so I never paid much attention! :-|
    Anyway, now I know you're an excellent writer. :)
    And thanks a lot. :)

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  19. @D2 well i dont comment...(guess i feel shy... yeah i know im weird :P) but i follow all your posts.i am gonna comment more often now then. and thanks again :)

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  20. Wow!! A lovely rhyming poem...enjoyed every stanza.. well weaved.. hey is it my first visit here.. well I am happy to have a wonderful poet here...God bless and may you do great.. studies are important... so nothing wrong in missing writing blog once a while but read you can even if for ten minutes to stay in touch with everyone around.. best wishes... RS :)

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  21. @Ramesh Ji. thanks a million for visiting my blog!! an di am really glad that you liked my poem

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