Thursday, January 24, 2013

Dusk

In twilight promises 
of glistening sands,
dusk rocks on death.

Written for Haiku Heights

19 comments:

  1. Lovely Haiku Kirti. Paints a vivid imagery. :)

    nice to see you in action after long time. :)

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    1. It feels amazing to write a Haiku again too Harshal! I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the visit :)

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  2. very strong worded, I would love to hear thoughts behind them.

    Perpetual Dark

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    1. Welcome to my blog Meenakshi :)
      I was trying to convey the idea of how dusk in all its darkness masks the killer rocks jutting within the sea. So though twilight makes the shores beautiful, dusk camouflages doom at the same time...
      Thanks for the visit :)

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  3. WOW! Oh my my that's quite some dark, strong imagery. I absolutely love this.

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    1. Thank you Shruti :) Welcome to my blog!

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  5. Nicely written NS! Exams over?

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    1. Thanks a lot DS! yeah second sem has already started and its hectic!

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    1. I find it a bit eerie too sam! thanks for the visit!:D

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  7. Wonderful haiku! You should write more for our group. ;-) Following you on GFC too.
    Eliz

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    1. Thanks a million! I will surely k=join your group.
      Thanks for the visit :)

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  8. Hai jeevan ki raftaar yahi, koi aata hai koi jaata hai...
    jaane wala aane waale ke liye aasan khaali kar jaata hai..
    - Anonymous :)

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