Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Stars

The sky that hides your
pain in clouds, betrayed by your 
eyes sparkling like stars.


Thanks to Leo for another 4-day poetry assignment :)

8 comments:

  1. Guess the rain that falls out from her clouded eyes can't hide the sparkling stars..

    Tears do do that for sure..

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  2. Hmmm. Think I get it. Beautifully conceived NS.

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  3. Very,very beautiful :) Sometimes things can be so hard to hide...and yet they are so necessary to stay hidden.

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  4. Wonderfully crafted haiku ... love the balance in it.

    Come visit my haikublog on: http://chevrefeuilleshaikublog.blogspot.com

    I have a weekly haiku meme Tackle It Tuesday. Maybe you will share your haiku with us on Tackle It Tuesday.

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  5. Hi

    Got an award for you at http://jaishwrites.blogspot.sg/2012/08/liebster-and-33-questions-again.htm :)

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  6. Oh,Where have you lost?
    Accepted,I don't comment here often and just silently read the posts..I do miss you!!
    Take care:)

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