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Stars

The sky that hides your
pain in clouds, betrayed by your 
eyes sparkling like stars.


Thanks to Leo for another 4-day poetry assignment :)

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  1. Vinay Leo R.August 8, 2012 at 9:47 PM

    Guess the rain that falls out from her clouded eyes can't hide the sparkling stars..

    Tears do do that for sure..

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherAugust 9, 2012 at 7:36 AM

    It's really hard for eyes to hide anything, isn't it?


    Everywhere the Stars

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  3. Amrit SinhaAugust 9, 2012 at 4:01 PM

    Metaphorical :-)

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  4. DSAugust 9, 2012 at 4:16 PM

    Hmmm. Think I get it. Beautifully conceived NS.

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  5. AntaraAugust 9, 2012 at 11:39 PM

    Very,very beautiful :) Sometimes things can be so hard to hide...and yet they are so necessary to stay hidden.

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  6. ChèvrefeuilleAugust 11, 2012 at 8:34 AM

    Wonderfully crafted haiku ... love the balance in it.

    Come visit my haikublog on: http://chevrefeuilleshaikublog.blogspot.com

    I have a weekly haiku meme Tackle It Tuesday. Maybe you will share your haiku with us on Tackle It Tuesday.

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  7. Jayashree SrivatsanAugust 23, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    Hi

    Got an award for you at http://jaishwrites.blogspot.sg/2012/08/liebster-and-33-questions-again.htm :)

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  8. Kinara :)September 25, 2012 at 8:23 PM

    Oh,Where have you lost?
    Accepted,I don't comment here often and just silently read the posts..I do miss you!!
    Take care:)

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