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JOY

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Eyes raised to heaven
see bigger dreams; this pang in
my heart, is it joy?

Written for Haiku Heights
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  1. DSMay 30, 2012 at 5:37 PM

    Dunno!!! Am very weak in interpreting poems...
    Cheer up ns!!

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    1. N.S.KirtiMay 31, 2012 at 12:18 PM

      I am fine already DS. thanks for your concern :)

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  2. Brian MillerMay 30, 2012 at 6:42 PM

    i think it might be...and that is not a bad thing at all...cute pic too...smiles...

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    1. N.S.KirtiMay 31, 2012 at 12:19 PM

      I think it might be too Brian. thanks for dropping by :)

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  3. Tarang SinhaMay 30, 2012 at 7:01 PM

    Lovely picture and really nice haiku!:)

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  4. AntaraMay 30, 2012 at 7:40 PM

    It SHOULD be joy :)
    And how CUTE is that photograph.
    And goooood haiku

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    1. N.S.KirtiMay 31, 2012 at 12:20 PM

      I think it is too Antara...
      yeah. SUPER cute!! :D
      thanks :)

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  5. Vinay Leo R.May 30, 2012 at 11:01 PM

    It is joy.. the dreams seem bigger, but dreams are ageless. :) Beautiful haiku and cute picture! ;)

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    1. N.S.KirtiMay 31, 2012 at 12:20 PM

      Dream are ageless... i totally agree.
      thanks a million!

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  6. Jaideep RaoMay 30, 2012 at 11:13 PM

    indeed and showing bigger dreams!! good :)

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  7. Stan SzczesnyMay 31, 2012 at 12:54 AM

    I like the juxtaposition of pang and joy.

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    1. N.S.KirtiMay 31, 2012 at 12:33 PM

      Joy sometimes does come with a pang i feel Stan. thanks for visiting :)

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  8. SemaphoreMay 31, 2012 at 8:45 AM

    I don't know what I enjoyed more, the poem or the picture!

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    1. N.S.KirtiMay 31, 2012 at 12:34 PM

      Well i leave it you to decide Semaphore! thanks for visiting :)

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  9. joannaMay 31, 2012 at 9:27 AM

    oh wow, this poem fits the picture so well... both smile-inducing. lovely haiku.

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    1. N.S.KirtiMay 31, 2012 at 12:36 PM

      the poem was inspired by the picture itself Joanna :)
      thank you so much :)

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  10. Mr.MiglaniMay 31, 2012 at 12:07 PM

    awesome wording

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  11. Anu ~*~May 31, 2012 at 9:16 PM

    Amazing ...
    i love the pic ... its unique ...

    Anu

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  12. NehaJune 1, 2012 at 12:58 AM

    Cute pic and loved your haiku :)

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  13. Magical Mystical TeacherJune 1, 2012 at 6:36 PM

    Startling juxtaposition of words: "pang" with "joy"

    In Judith’s Garden

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  14. T F CarthickJune 2, 2012 at 8:28 AM

    Appropriate for the picture. Lot of people do this is Haiku. But I personally feel poetry should stand on its own legs and not depend on a picture as a crutch though most Haiku writers do this.

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  15. NAWALJune 2, 2012 at 6:42 PM

    the pic is cute, the answer is still unclear in my head, pang in my heart is echoing all along...

    VERY INTRIGUING!!!!!!!!

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  16. The PoetJune 5, 2012 at 6:28 AM

    My friend,
    Who wouldn't like that picture!!

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  17. AnonymousJune 8, 2012 at 7:14 AM

    Nice expression of joy both in the verse and picture:)

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