Wednesday, May 30, 2012

JOY

Photo taken from here

Eyes raised to heaven
see bigger dreams; this pang in
my heart, is it joy?

Written for Haiku Heights
Also linked at dverse

27 comments:

  1. Dunno!!! Am very weak in interpreting poems...
    Cheer up ns!!

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    1. I am fine already DS. thanks for your concern :)

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  2. i think it might be...and that is not a bad thing at all...cute pic too...smiles...

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    1. I think it might be too Brian. thanks for dropping by :)

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  3. Lovely picture and really nice haiku!:)

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  4. It SHOULD be joy :)
    And how CUTE is that photograph.
    And goooood haiku

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    1. I think it is too Antara...
      yeah. SUPER cute!! :D
      thanks :)

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  5. It is joy.. the dreams seem bigger, but dreams are ageless. :) Beautiful haiku and cute picture! ;)

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    1. Dream are ageless... i totally agree.
      thanks a million!

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  6. indeed and showing bigger dreams!! good :)

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    1. Thanks Jaideep :) glad you liked it.

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  7. I like the juxtaposition of pang and joy.

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    1. Joy sometimes does come with a pang i feel Stan. thanks for visiting :)

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  8. I don't know what I enjoyed more, the poem or the picture!

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    1. Well i leave it you to decide Semaphore! thanks for visiting :)

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  9. oh wow, this poem fits the picture so well... both smile-inducing. lovely haiku.

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    1. the poem was inspired by the picture itself Joanna :)
      thank you so much :)

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  10. Amazing ...
    i love the pic ... its unique ...

    Anu

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  11. Cute pic and loved your haiku :)

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  12. Appropriate for the picture. Lot of people do this is Haiku. But I personally feel poetry should stand on its own legs and not depend on a picture as a crutch though most Haiku writers do this.

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  13. the pic is cute, the answer is still unclear in my head, pang in my heart is echoing all along...

    VERY INTRIGUING!!!!!!!!

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  14. My friend,
    Who wouldn't like that picture!!

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  15. Nice expression of joy both in the verse and picture:)

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