Thursday, August 11, 2011

A terse question


Will the tiny rain drop
surrender to its peers,
forcing to take it beneath?
or will it cling 
to the narrow windshield 
daring to be unique?

This question i ask my heart
for the rain of time is
shuddering my drop-like dreams
would they survive?
be a part of unknown half?
or merge with the common stream...

8 comments:

  1. How beautifully you told the journey of a droplet! Brilliant use of words beneath and unique. Great creation..

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  2. thanks you Saru Ji. and er.. i didnt use the words intentionally, they came with the flow :)

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  3. Wow!
    And the droplet I know so well can never be a part of the common stream :) And she will be something else :)

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  4. thank you so much Antara!! thats so sweet of you :)

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  5. the imagery of the fate of a raindrop is amazing, what elegant piece.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  6. Wonderful story told beautifully. Very nicely done!

    Here is my second offering for this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/

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  7. @The cello strings thanks you so much :)
    @charlesmashburn thanks. and your poem is simply wonderful too!

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