My First Acrostic

My first poem in Acrostic form, which i learnt from Jo Bryant. Thanks Jo!! your poem really inspired me :)

KIRTI

Kindred spirit of
Imaginary origins;
Remembering sad vestiges of past,
Treading on the waters of present,
Initiating bright glow of future

Comments

  1. WOw, your first attempt is awesome. I love this form to poetry especially when you've to dedicate something. I'm also trying to write one. Nice:)

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  2. Thank you for joining Poets United. We look forward to visiting your blog and reading poetry. We also look forward to seeing you in our community.

    Ink runs from the corners of my mouth
    There is no happiness like mine.
    I have been eating poetry.
    ~Mark Strand

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  3. Wonderfully positive - I like the last line.
    Matthew

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  4. I like it! Very nicely done. Wonderful flow.

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  5. first is best ! :)
    may u shine with rest ...

    nice keep writing & smiling :)

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  6. @saru thank you very much :)
    @poets united. i too am delighted at joining a wonderful community like yours :)
    @Matthew thank you so much :)
    @charles. glad you like my words :)
    @MLM thankyou!! you rock!!
    @sowmya thanks! i visited your blog too.. its awesome!! keep going.. i commented but its not showing up..
    @antomaniax thank you and i really hope i keep doing that :)

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  7. I love acrostics too (although I haven't exactly tried many).
    This one was so so soooo good!

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  8. creative, thanks for sharing.

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  9. thanks antara :)
    thank you Jingle :)

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  10. Now u have inspired me too...so am trying to make one too...:)

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  11. cool Rainak!! do try and write one :)

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