My First Acrostic

My first poem in Acrostic form, which i learnt from Jo Bryant. Thanks Jo!! your poem really inspired me :)

KIRTI

Kindred spirit of
Imaginary origins;
Remembering sad vestiges of past,
Treading on the waters of present,
Initiating bright glow of future

Comments

  1. WOw, your first attempt is awesome. I love this form to poetry especially when you've to dedicate something. I'm also trying to write one. Nice:)

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  2. Wonderfully positive - I like the last line.
    Matthew

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  3. I like it! Very nicely done. Wonderful flow.

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  4. Oh wow very well done =)

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  5. first is best ! :)
    may u shine with rest ...

    nice keep writing & smiling :)

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  6. @saru thank you very much :)
    @poets united. i too am delighted at joining a wonderful community like yours :)
    @Matthew thank you so much :)
    @charles. glad you like my words :)
    @MLM thankyou!! you rock!!
    @sowmya thanks! i visited your blog too.. its awesome!! keep going.. i commented but its not showing up..
    @antomaniax thank you and i really hope i keep doing that :)

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  7. I love acrostics too (although I haven't exactly tried many).
    This one was so so soooo good!

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  8. thanks antara :)
    thank you Jingle :)

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  9. Now u have inspired me too...so am trying to make one too...:)

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  10. cool Rainak!! do try and write one :)

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