Wednesday, June 6, 2012

LOCK

Under lock you have
my hand and my heart; cant you
spare my dreams at least?


Written for Haiku Heights 

27 comments:

  1. Hmmm. I can't comment what I want here...you know what I want to say.

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  2. Love spares nothing :) not even dreams :) lovely... :)

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    1. It doesnt Maharukh... i realized that... thanks for the visit :)

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  3. Such deep voice and questions heard in this work! Liking your blog in my first visit here :)

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    1. Welcome to my blog Jaideep. and i am so glad you are liking it here!! :)

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  4. I feel I understand what you mean by this. I may be wrong, but knowing you to an extent, I feel so.

    Long ago I stood
    in these very shoes; at times
    I wish I had ran

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    1. I feel like running away too leo... anyways, thank you!

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  5. good one! nice to visit your blog...

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    1. Thank you Madhuresh! and welcome to my blog :)

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    1. It is definitely sad MMT! thanks for the visit :)

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  7. Wow!! Understood it. Heartfelt. And Leo ka toh jawab nahi, haiku pe haiku likh diya!!

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    1. Hana sach me uska jawab nahi!! :D thanks DS :)

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    1. I agree Pranita. reading it back, even i feel the pain to be profound. Thank you for the visit :)

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  9. very contemplative and rather universal feeling one time or other ~ thanks, ^_^ ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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    1. :( we are in the same boat then Kay...
      anyhow, glad you visited my blog! :)

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  11. Right from the heart. Most artists can connect with you.

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  12. Curbing some one's dream....good theme to write upon !!!

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