Because words make my life more alive
I could picture a forest at dawn with the first rays of light breaching the leafy canopy. those light rays which later in the day are unnoticed as they blend with the other rays :) beautiful haiku. one of the best I've seen from you.
That is exactly the picture i imagined while writing this Leo! woah, seems to me you are turning a mind-reader ;)i am so glad my haiku reached to you so well :)
short and simple !
thanks Rahul :) and a haiku needs to be short and simple!! :D
I have seriously started to love your haiku now :) Ever since you wrote the one about blue ink, you've been getting better and better and better.Love this!
yay! :D (because you love my haiku by now :P)and seriously yaar, that blue one is my favorite till now.and thank you! :D
I agree on what Leo said, really a best and extraordinary!
Thank you Jaideep :)
Definitely not an ordinary haiku :0 makes me imagine a beautiful picture of it :) lovely!
Thank you Maharukh. glad it painted the image i wanted :)
superb one... :)
hmm Amazing haiku .. :)ordinary view
Thank you Anu :)
This is what I call a picture..without a picture..a true haiku..creating the picture in readers mind..well done...God bless!!RS:)
Thank you Ramesh Ji!! i am so glad you like it!! :D
Thank God for Leo for that comment!!! Or else I was completely lost!
LOL :P no matter DS, but its a pity you dont get my poems!
Thank you Panchali Di! good to see you here! :)
It paints a beautiful picture in my head!Does the universe whisper to you?
I am glad it does Pranita :)
It takes open eyes to see familiar things in new ways.Ordinary Day
So true MMT... so true... thanks for the visit! :)
I dont know much about Haiku but that was simple and beautiful indeed!
Thank you Jaish :)
lovely Haiku...loved the last line...superbly written... :) :) :)
Thank you so much!! :)
Lovely dawn images ~ Nice one ~
Glad you liked it Grace. good to have you back on my blog :)
Concept was brilliant. Loved it. But wonder what is that 'dawn' doing there. It seems to be introduced just to maintain the syllable count.
dawn as in the importance of a ordinary prick of light dawning upon me... actually i wanted to use some other word, but yeah, had to keep in with the syllable count.glad you liked it TF!!
You read my thoughts. Would love it if you share yours :)