Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Another Haiku?? :P

If my pen's nib breaks and
and the ink flows; would I bank
the river of my words?

9 comments:

  1. Nope,you would just let the words flow. And I do hope that you will.Lovely piece :)

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  2. lol.. thank you both. that was surely encouraging :)

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  3. Quite beautiful words :) But you just overshot it in syllables I think :D I read a 6-7-6 form here :) Keep at it. Your thoughts are becoming quite mature. And please don't worry about a nib break. You just flow on..

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  4. AWWWW!!!!!!!! i didnt check the syllables properly!! gross... anyways thanks lEO.. :):)

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  5. From the two posts I've read so far....I should think not:-)

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  6. Wow! I've never tried Haikus.. This sure gives me inspiration! :)

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  7. thank you Nadira Ji.
    thank you Malini. do try and write a Haiku. but check the rules first. i made a mistake with the syllables...

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