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Tears
like 
warm rain
cascade down
my pain-kissed sad eyes;
soothe the scalded sore
thats's burning
inside
my 
heart
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  1. Princess PooFebruary 13, 2012 at 2:17 PM

    So true!
    This relates a lot to me.
    This couldn't be defined any better.
    Good Job dear.

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  2. Tarang SinhaFebruary 13, 2012 at 6:16 PM

    "my pain-kissed sad eyes" I really liked this!
    Beautiful and touching composition indeed:)

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  3. Saru SinghalFebruary 14, 2012 at 8:23 AM

    Beautiful expression...When it comes to the word 'tear', you weave magical words...

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  4. N.S.KirtiFebruary 14, 2012 at 10:57 AM

    @Pooja Tears do soothe the burns that scald our insides dont they? glad you liked this... :)

    @Tarang Thank you. I am glad you found this touching. :)

    @saru di Morbid poetry has got something to do with me i guess!! thank you for liking this! :)

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  5. AntaraFebruary 14, 2012 at 3:44 PM

    Ah. Fibbo. Love them.
    Sometimes tears do help...i wished they helped me. Or rather even came to me.
    Lovely poem :-)

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  6. ArtiFebruary 14, 2012 at 5:09 PM

    Wonderful play of words, the pain is deeply expressed in just a few heartfelt words.. lovely!

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  7. DSFebruary 15, 2012 at 6:43 AM

    Beautifully expressed. The tears do help us to lighten our souls a bit.
    Your poems are fabulous NS, Keep up:)

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  8. N.S.KirtiFebruary 15, 2012 at 10:32 AM

    @Antara sorry couldnt call you yesterdya. i fell sick myself :P and why so much agony dear?

    @Arti Di thank you so much!! love ya!

    @DS Thanks a million. real happy you liked this one :)

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